Thoughts

Thoughts I have conquered before,
Left me exposed in front of persons,
Protected from the past no more,
Engulfed by madness as it worsens.
Thoughts I treasured in my core,
Scattered as butterflies far away,
Confiscated as I stumble ashore,
Forgot the true nature of my way.
Thoughts I mapped to explore,
Faded as if a tiny water vapour,
Forgotten behind a closed door,
Plain as a blank sheet of paper.
Thoughts I forced out after a roar,
Found a gust of air for a breath,
Reclaimed my aim in this war,
Guided into the arms of death.
 
Wednesday, 9thof May 2012
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4 thoughts on “Thoughts

  1. MIB says:

    I absolutely LOVED the first & last stanzas! Why'd ya stop writing?! Post some new stuff..you can't take a month's break!._.”

    ebdaaaa3, Mashalla 3layyyk..brilliant!

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  2. Bu Thyab says:

    yay, an old visitor 😛

    so a poem once a month is not sufficient?! u want more of nonsense 😛 hehe

    nah, am glad u're enjoying these poems 🙂

    actually, i've got a poem in my mind, but i just need to think how to put it together 😛

    stay tuned!!

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  3. Alexis says:

    I adore the rythm in this.
    Very enjoyable. “Found a gust of air for breath.” That feeling springs to mind
    😀

    Like

  4. Bu Thyab says:

    I'm glad you liked it

    ^^,

    Like

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